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Re: Just Getting Started Chapter 1Prologue
Hello I'm Storm and I shall review your story for you. First thing to know is that for every story post you have to do two reviews. There are more ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: The Apocalyps
Heya Dragnet! I liked this. It was very interesting except for the grammar, punctuation, nitpicks like that. Dreamwalker got a lot of the stuff i have just a few more ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Ugh i double posted and cant delete...
Umm if you want to delete this then there should be a X button on the top right of the box where the writing is. I think its around the ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Not from London
Heya~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WELCOME TOOOO YWS!!! I'm sure you not insanely boring... Though i think i might be. What do you write? What do you like to read? Huhuhuh
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1
Thanks Everybody for their comments! They are very much appreciated!!!!! I'm editing this, all the tenses are messed up i know. And I'm also almost done with the second chapter! ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Guardians chapter 1 part one Edited and extended
Well 'ello there! I will review your story for you! Its a classic orphanage/orphan thing is it? No matter, its all fine by me. It interesting, can't wait for the ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Hello darlings
HEYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hiya!! I read your story. Interesting idea! :) Don't know if i reviewed it though... Hmmm. Anyways welcome welcome! Whaats youre favorite:
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Hello fellow writers!
Heya! Welcome to YWS! Its pretty awesome! So you read all the rules already? K, don't have to say anything then. Well except WELCOME!!!!!!! So what kinda of books do ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Phoenix Saga chapter 6 Not a Superhero
Helleo! Thanks for the PM. Love the story so far! Okay onto the review! :) Demetre dressed slowly even though his head was spinning from all the questions he had. ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Enemies to Buddies: Two
Hello! I'm Storm, and I shall review this story today! :) pink flip-flops Does she wear shoes in her house? because i don't know anybody that does. She shook her ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Phoenix Saga Chapter 5 Ghost Boy
Yay! Chapter 5 is out. It was good but kinda short. Are you still going the two chapter per person thing? I'm guessing that the person Sean called was the ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Rawr! I Eat Buildings! (cartoon godzilla thing)
Well this a picture i was doodling. Sorry, I was trying to scan it but my scanner wouldn't work so I just took a picture of it and posted it. ...
Feb 26, 2009 -
Re: Need a review? Then come here!
Hiya! Do you think you can review mine? Pretty please! Here's the link. It's in fantasy, hope you like it. -Storm :D
Feb 26, 2009 -
Re: What can Cat do for you?
Hey Cat! Do you think you can review this for me? IT's in fantasy and here is the link. Thanks bunches and bunches! -Storm_Bringer
Feb 26, 2009 -
Re: A Ghostly Encounter: Part 2
Hello again! Well this was an interesting continuation to chapter one. The only thing is that wouldn't the nurses think she's crazy because she keeps seeing things and talking to ...
Feb 26, 2009
