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Re: The Gate
Heya Rosie. Awesome story here. A couple of grammer mistakes that Colt didn't catch. “‘Watsa matter ‘Ren?” I said cheerfully to my older sister. You don't need this: ' after ...
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Re: young little newby
Hey BB. Welcome to YWS as everyone else is saying. =) Cool avatar. You like manga/animes? I'm in 7th grade too. No worries on the grammar/punctuation. If you post your ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Italy
Oh. If you want to resize you can just go to Adobe Illustrator open file (your flower picture) and go view and do zoom out. Yep. Hope that helps. The ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Rain Covered Flower
Hey Scorpia! Thanks for the review on my pic so I'm here to return the favor! Wow. This is a pretty flower. It looks like a carnation yet there is ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Birdie Creature
Awww. He is super cute, the outer shading then the thiner line is really good effects. If you sharpie and color him/her it would be cool. I'm kinda imaging a ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Dragon Bird
Cool! The face looks like it has a mask over it. I agree with lordgluzman color would really do wonders for this picture. The wings are... a little awkward. It ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: What an insomniac does after 3...
Hey lizzyfer! Woah. The colors are super vivid. How did you do the effects? I couldn't tell what you (is this you?) were holding in the orange one though. Nice ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Standing Long Jump Animation
Haha. That was cool! The man jumped funny! He also looks a bit funny, but thats just a basic person sketch right? It would be more funny if you make ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
Hmmm. My sister introduced me. She was surfing the web and ta-dah~ So yep. That is how I joined.
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Life's Music
Wow. This was a great poem. I loved the rhythm and the word choices. Its super pretty, especially with the theme of music to it. Gold Star! ~Storm
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Athenry.
Hey Stella! Well, this was interesting. Mary and Joseph huh? Now, what does that remind me of? Just kidding. Poor Michael. Mary gets over him pretty fast though. Some things ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Memories for a Rainy Day
Hello Indigo! I'll review your story today! :) Awww. This is so sweet but sad. Is it a prologue of a story or just a piece you felt like writing? ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Purple Magic: Chapter 1
Hiya Lydia! This story is good. I wonder why nobody else reviewed it yet. Although there isn't much to review. There were no grammer mistakes and the writing was good. ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Air Show
Hey, this was really good. I like the blue smoke following them. 1) Cool! Black and white! But a litle bit long. 2) Wow. The smoke and the sky look ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Raise a Glass to the Poor
Hey Krupp! Well, I'm not much of a review on lyrics but I liked yours. Very worldly. Have you listened to "Where is the Love" by Black Eye Peas? It ...
Mar 28, 2009
