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Re: Beginning of the Spenser ~ Laurence Trilogy
Hello! Back again! :D Hmmm. Well, I'm not sure. If you see it correctly in preview it should be the same... Did you copy and paste it or write it ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Beginning of the Spenser ~ Laurence Trilogy
Hello Masala!!! Welcome to the site!!!! :D Okay, first thing: You should only indent on the beginning of a paragraph. Not the whole thing. :wink: Another thing: When a new ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 2
Did the revisions... Reviews and comments are appreciated. Or you can just vote in my poll. XD Seriously, you can. Chapter 2 I sprinted to the library, a half a ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1
Thanks everybody. I edited it once again. Ugh... Those tenses are really getting to me. Anyways Chapter 2 is almost done I'll be posting it soon. :D
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: The Other Realm, Chapter One.
Hey Holly! Well, this was very interesting, although I was confused with all the characters. You should add some discription to add to the characters so we know who is ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Sup, fellow Writers? Newbie here. xDD
Hiya Neko! Welcome to YWS!!!! :D There are some Rules :arrow: No chatspeak or all capitals. :arrow: No swearing and keep your posts clean. (You can swear in stories but ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Stormy Reviews~
All done! *in desprate need of more work to review* Please help me? =) Stormy reviews right here~
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: The Court of Gilded Birds: cheeseball fantasy extraordinaire
Hello! Here as you asked! :D Wow. This was interesting! I loved the bird part and the characters were funny but a wee bit boring (only from there dialogue). Ummm, ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Hey Holly! (Do you mind if I call you that?) Welcome to YWS!!!! I like to write fantasy stories too. :D It is awesome and I'm sure you'll love it! ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
sadness
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Mercy On Me
Hello! Welcome to YWS!!! This poem is great. I feel like that too, when I'm new at school. Since you're new you might want to do a few things: 1. ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Only a Soldier
Hello Catfood! Welcome to YWS!!!!! Let's get onto the review! They hope by the Grace of God, That they might be dying. :shock: Why would they hope they would be ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: An ode to a Ball of String
Hey Erica! Welcome to YWS!!! (you are kind of new) :D Onto the review: There is no nitpicks. Good job on that. 1. This kinda of sounds like a whole ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: The glare
Hey, welcome to YWS!!!! Just some tips because you are kind of new. 1. For every post you must do two reviews. You probably haven't gotten any responses to this ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Stormy Reviews~
Done with yours TL G-Wooster, good job on that story. It was awesome! Anyone else?
Apr 9, 2009