Storm_Bringer

I'm back!! Sorry about that... So, back to the nitpicks... Matt’s going out, again” I replied, Comma after again. That link I gave you will help your punctuation with people ...

Hello. I got the PM, so I'll review your story today! :) First thing: A little tip, Dialogue Punctuation It's a common mistake... I'll give you a link that helps ...

Hooray for Evi!!!! Great job! :)

Done with yours Writers Block! Getting to the others! Sorry I'm so slow lately, school and the end of the year homework has been a hassle! Again, Sorry!

Hey, Welcome to YWS! Thanks for posting in my thread, and sorry I took so long. I haven't been on YWS for a while. Hmm, okay so you said to ...

Come on, you know you want one~

Hello AJ, (Do you mind that nickname?) New Jersey, huh? That's cool. I live in Hawaii. Aloha! :P So Peanut and Colleen explained most of it, just a few more ...

Hey Row, LyzzyRedd, and Dotygirl63, Welcome to YWS!!!! Glad you already like YWS! :D It's great for improving on your writing and meeting tons of new people. Being new is ...

Oh, yeah, Renn is a girl... I think either Thunder_Dude made a mistake or just a typo. Sorry for the confusion. ^__^

Congrats Blue!!! (Good job, Rosey~) Next time, purples!

Aww, that's soo sweet! Thanks for including me. ^_^ It's so cool! So my list: Peanutgallery007~ (AP, Peanut, April) :P For being one of my closest friends on YWS, and ...

Hey Doodle~ I liked this story, it was very interesting. I especially like the "No talking" girl. That's not something you hear about everyday! (I liked it!) :P Well, Nitpicks ...

Hello KJ, Wow. This was really interesting. I liked it a lot!! Hmmm, Angel pretty much got all the nitpiicks so I'll just do my comments. This sort of reminded ...

Done, Vivacious! Stormy Reviews Exchange Rate: One post in my thread=Three cookies =)

Hello, Thanks for posting on my thread. Okay, so first nitpicks. I can’t believe you won! I think you should change it to I not you. It was a bit ...