Stori

Ok, what's a POTC? I know what you mean about him having no personality... This was a fluke from the start. :(

Well... I don't know what to say. The plot is well done, especially the way you wove the vision in with the storm.

Name: Kaltan Dna: Falcon Appearance: big wings, long talons on hands. Wears a three-fingered glove on his right hand. Golden eyes, brown skin and has a scarred face. Mostly keeps ...

Anyone on Earth would think Roc a freak. He had long, silver-streaked black hair, pale skin and a tall frame- nearly six feet. The pale skin would have smacked of ...

I think this is good, but what's it based on? And the sentence, "Get ready for hyperspace," would work better with "he adivsed" or something. That's me, but "reported" isn't ...

Ok. Could I place this in my blog? So far I just wrote as it came to me. Thanks for the advice, and keep reading.

Bravo! I think free verse poetry might catch on. Great poem, and I like the way you mention your son at the end.

But does anyone like Anime? I love it; some of my faves are Wolf's Rain, Star Ocean EX and Advent Children.

Hey, nice to meet you. I guess you want to know about me. Well (devious grin) where should I start? My real name is Jorin, and if you can't manage ...

Hi, I'm Kyte. I'm fluent in British (Brian Jacques, wot?) and I know a little Japanese and Spanish. I like fantasy, science fiction and a little of other kinds. I ...

Hey, I'm Kyte. I discovered the YWS in a google search, and here I am! Please take time to read "Dragon Remnant" in the Action/Adventure forum.

I hate being sick. It makes me feel helpless, and I don’t want to die. Memories keep swirling through my head. I'll try to keep them in order. Night, and ...

I like the description, like, "The eerie glow is comforting..." The very contradiciton helps out. And, "My tratorous lids slide closed."

I think this should go under "dark fiction." The story is bizarre, and what's with the doll?

Tom jerked awake. His tousled blond hair stuck out every which way. He rand a hand through it, and it somehow became a messy part. He snatched at his amulet, ...