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Here's my character. I'll use a profile I already created. Name: Chance Gender: Male Bio: He and his sister, Hope, appear in "Healer's Mark." Chance is a dedicated fighter, learning ...

Have you ever heard "The Briar and the Rose?" That would be a good place to start. Listen. Anyway, thanks for posting. A round of applause for your effort!

A little explanation seems to be in order. First of all, Azure is Carl. He takes on human shape to hide. The "others" are also dragons, who you'll meet later. ...

Ok, let me try. This will be based on my "Tearstone Tales" series. You can choose your species. Squirrel: Has a natural skill at climbing anything from a tree to ...

Name: Miles Keyston Age 14 Bio: he loves skating, chatting online and working with Photoshop. He lives alone excert for Tigre, his cat. Eyes: light green Hair: dark brown, almost ...

Bravo! The description is great, and I loved the last line, "If only roses had wings."

Well, this is a fresh perspective. The writing is clear and the point gets across. A good poem!

The end was very well done, very emotional. I like the way the letter was written, though I speculate about "life and blood." Over all this was well done. I ...

The end was very well done, very emotional. I like the way the letter was written, though I speculate about "life and blood." Over all this was well done. I ...

Wow. You totally captivated me with that. I can't see many mistakes. It was well done and a real treat.

I can't take credit for this. It belongs to Jivaru, or Stella. She recalls the forest home she left behing to "see the galaxy." 'Neath the whispering trees And the ...

I loved the sentence where it says "tears polishing her eyes." The rest of the time, you just told. Describe the girl some more, as well as the village and ...

There were some spelling errors. Like "two pairs o enemy feet," and "a twig snapped under the weight..." Also, I think you should trim the introduction. Maybe you could integrate ...

Here's my two cents. The story needs more description, and the characters ought to have more 'flesh' to them. For instance, how does the lady look as she talks? What ...

That was beautiful. The description was good. The idea of a lonely child is well spoken.