Stori

I love the names; they're so original. A few errors: "The sword was sheathed in a scabbard." That means the same thing, so you could say, "It was sheathed in ...

"Oh, hang it, Raura!" I practically screamed. "Did you have to?" "She bumped me! I'm sorry, but she panicked, then fainted." I began gathering herbs: mint to revive, some berries ...

Great job, all! The wolf is allowed. Same for the eagle. Keep the chapters coming. And here's another little twist. There is a colony of weasels on Broken Arrow Point. ...

Okay, here's an edit. Duo looked from Quatre to me. "I just don't get it. Do you talk to your Suit?" "Sure," I replied. "Whatever," Duo said and went back ...

Duo looked from Quatre to Trowa. "Well, I guess." He took out a tool kit and opened Deathscythe's cockpit. He was more objective than Quatre, but more emotional than Trowa. ...

Not much to say after that... except that it's beautiful. I don't think America will ever forget 9/11, nor should they.

"Chance, get up!" I turned away. What did she want? "I said get up!" She yanked the sheet from over me. "Come on, it's almost dawn." "Yes, and it's time ...

I think being an eagle kind of unbalances the game. You know, they're so much larger than others. Well, you could, but let's say you have a disability (injured wing, ...

"I am so dead," I muttered, "it's not funny." I spread out my wings and launched myself from the factory. Two Hell Hawks quickly followed. "Damn them anyway," I muttered ...

First of all, I think a werewolf is a human-wolf hybrid, so "half breed" is unnecessary. And how are they supposed to have children if the werewoles are the masters? ...

Hey everyone, Kyte's Daily Page is now online. I have big plans, one of them being a quote updated either every day or every week. So come on in, and ...

Amber was fire-engine red, and she knew it. She turned away and muttered, "I guess I'll go home." The situation was resolved as Miles strolled up. He looked from Max ...

I like the dialog and I love the name Traistal. Thought he was a girl at first, xD Anyway, keep up the good work.

A question: What does Twigs stand for? Is it the series name you based it on?

Fist off, we need to know who "she" is. Is it a wolf?