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Name: Ari Looks: Dark-streaked blond hair, red clothes Personality: He's afraid of everyone after learning about his Dragoon heritage. He likes to be alone except for his hawk, Danye. Dragoon ...

Yeah! The use of rhyme, meter and synonym were superb. By synonym I specifically want to point out the last line: "So distant, so far." That's poetry!

Could you explain the musical terms? I don't know that much :cry: Anyway, a great poem. Keep at it.

I'm no nit-picker, but the name should be "Aries." And I think this should be prose, not poetry. Of course you can disagree.

A bit wordy, I think. Maybe you could break it up into two posts. The description is great, especially the "other world." Character description is also good. All in all, ...

Thanks. The story, I guess is sometime during A New Hope. It's a bit difficult since it's turning out to be and "alternate universe." The characters are all there: Han, ...

The Corrillean YT-400 Starbolt angled away from the shipyards. Its triangular hull was pitted from many years of Imperial service. No ship like home, Kale thought. He touched the hilt ...

Tolkien rhyming: egads! I never heard such a thing, except for Tom Bombadil. He's one of my favorite characters. Anywho, it's a great poem.

Who's speaking Latin? Anyway, great job. I like it. Maybe you could add another verse?

Go to [url]Youtube.com[/url] and look up "True light." They have it in English and Japanese. Tell me what you think!

Standing on the tremor's edge I reflect on nothing. Feeling the earth shake I brace myself. Now's the time. It's drawing in. I'm ready, I'm ready. Let's start this again! ...

Ooh, I love it! The idea is great. And it reminds me of "Crystal Chronicles." That's a great game, IMHO. Thanks for this!

I like how you used "cause." The lines go well together actually. It's all a seamless piece, but again you should extend it.

He was a character, Trowa Barton. He kept his nerve in any situation, and often had his expression hidden behind long brown hair. I think he does it on purpose. ...

Great!! I like the imagery. For instance, "typing away at her laptop, chomping on bear's claws. The one problem, and a big one, is that I can't relate. I didn't ...