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OMG, nearly spilled it there. What a great use of color! It's so emotional too.

I must be too used to rhyming poetry :( The piece didn't give me any feeling at all.

Oh, would that I had Photoshop! Anyway, it's a good picture.

Thanks, Kitty. I'll take your suggestion to heart. And thanks for letting me know what you think.

Miles He got home at half past and immediately crashed. "What a day," he muttered to Tigre. The cat meowed and licked his face. Miles giggled. "Quit it, you overgrown ...

What's Cardcaptor Sakura? Never heard of it. Nice job though.

Well, I usually put in your basic description: eye color, hair, etc. I leave the personality to the reader. So, that being my choice, who agrees?

Some mistakes. "He possibly could have killed Jacob" needs to go. "Possibly" and "might have" are the same thing. And you spelled "meters" the British way. Well, okay, there's one. ...

I wonder... I really don't like rap. In fact I don't consider it as "Music." As for the idea about a long track, well, that might work.

I think some color wouldn't go wrong. All of your drawings are bleak without it. If that's your intent, feel free to ignore my suggestion :D

I don't know. It was a gripping story, and well told. The pace is just right. But there' s no description. No stone prison walls, no characters with blond or ...

Telling not showing! Work on it!!! Describe the realm and its characters. Give some details about the rulers' history.

Hi. My name is John Malcolm. I'm your typical teen except for one thing: I travel between worlds. It all started a while back. I was playing basketball with my ...

My first sight of a car was two days later. I was wandering, and found myself standing by a long gray trail. There were tall things along it with harsh ...

Cool. Is this going to continue? I hope so. The character is as yet undeveloped. So, let's meet this boy. (I'm guessing it's a boy.)