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Hmm... Can't say FF 8 is one of my favorites. I guess that's because I've never played. I like 9 and 10, as well as Crystal Chronicles. Anyway, I'll read ...

Hey why is everyone posting in red? And what is this all about?

Oh, Pendragon :D I used to read those. It's neat how the author alternates between Bobby and his friends. I read up to "The Realiy Bug" and was never disappointed. ...

IMHO, don't end with questions. End with something like, "The Faries are gearing up for war..." Or something like that.

Oh, well... So you want to send us some "swag," which involves pictures. Ok, what else is new?

Ai-ya-yai, that's a mess! You keep getting the tenses mixed up. Just look at the introduction of the "voice."

Wow! I love the rythem. My brother fences, so he'd like this too. One qualm I had: you should break it up into stanzas. That would help the flow.

Five stars to you! A great poem as well as an example of free verse.

You know, I read "Things not Seen" by Andrew Clements. He used an effective technique. "It's what I see. It's what I don't see. I'm not there. I'm. Not. There." ...

I liked how you said, "Enough words to describe hills and leaves stretching past Heaven." Great imagery. The whole thing was well done. I think there was a contest... Is ...

It was a good piece. You need to explain more about the "Burners" though. What are they? Do they breathe air? Also, I think you need to break up the ...

Well, if there was an epic poetry section, this would go in it. The rhyming was good if a little forced. I liked the part about Lucifer.

Hmm, I usually use the "How to" books for basic shape. I'm horrible at the "start from a stick figure" approach; I try to draw the person "fleshed out."

Oh, it was all right. I just wish I had Photoshop and a scanner.... It's frustraging! Well, I did some pictures with Printmaster, maybe I'll post some.

Cool. I'm not particularly religios, but that was a great picture. Thanks!