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First the boy is on the mountain, then it's 500 years ago? What gives?

"Argg... If Saint Dane was on Earth, would they have time to get at a computer?" The foreign word flowed easily; Travelers know all languages. "I don't know!" Bobby paced ...

Miran was totally humiliated. Scared by a shapeshifter? Spineless lizard. He growled at her, "Next time, warn me. I'm very jumpy." He fanned his wings and started to take off. ...

It was a bit of a "well, I'll do something different" thing. I saw all the wolf stories and said, "What about foxes?" Where it's going, I'm not sure. I'll ...

It's creepy. I like that. Again, why is this in "historical fiction?" Is there more? Yeah, you should break up the paragraphs. And please, post more.

My head hurt. Somehow or other, the flume had thrown me against the wall. I fingered a thin line where the crystal had cut my scalp. Bobby notice. "You're hurt, ...

"Oh gosh, I wish I had Spider-Man's power," Miles said to himself. "Has anyone seen my date? Amber? Nobody?" Nobody had. He described her to several people, and they all ...

Well, it's rushed. How does the riot start? Who is this escaped convict? Answer those questions, and give us an idea of the setting. Show, don't tell.

In the end it should be "He woke up and it got worse." This is a little rushed. Slow down. Describe Derek, and the school he goes to. Tell us ...

Don't worry, it's good. *thumbs up* Just keep at it.

Danye shrieked and dove at the virage. "NO!" I lunged and caught her tail feathers. She screamed again and raked me with her talons. "Dart, help me!" He flew in, ...

The story: Humans are extinct. The cats they left behind have formed a society, living together in tribes or "Claws." You play as a cat from any Claw, and you ...

Why is the MC in school if he's invisible? Why doesn't he skip? And how did he become invisible?

Okay, fellows. If no one posts within 2 weeks, I'll declare this story "dead."

I stood in front of the Flume. "Denduron!" The musical notes began, then the light. The walls became crystal. Another Traveler hurtled out. He landed, glanced at me and smiled. ...