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Hello! I'll just crit this as I go along: Its triangular hull was pitted from many years of Imperial service. "Not anymore," Kale muttered. He touched the hilt of his ...

Oh my God. I heard it! I heard this in my mind! It was a song!

Amazing. It's so cool, the way you brought out the werewolf in the last paragraphs. 5 stars! Is there an emoticon for that?

God! *hurts ches* that's funny!

A dark parody! Funny! I love it; made my day.

Jax fervently swore in a dozen languages. He payed no attention as to whether the words were actually swear words. A sandy-furred alien, Kuust, popped his head out of the ...

I have an idea! I did a short called "Underdog"-- oops, Disney beat me to the title. It's about, surprise, werewolves. Good werewolves. If that sounds confusing, I'm sorry. I ...

Come on, it's fast paced. Funny but fast paced. Good job, but you had a major run-on in p.1.

Is the equip. working? The voice is soo bland. But still... I'm listening.

It's great, but every single line doesn't have to be funny. And the "Muffin Man" part from Shrek... Cool. "Married to the muffin man?" "THE MUFFIN MAN!" Now, if you're ...

He was struck by an inspiration. I guess. Well, yeah, it is short. The first scene in my second script.

"Go away. I'm fed up to my tail with you. Beat it, whatever you are!" She looked hurt. "Of course, you could just say, 'It's nice to meet you, now ...

Gosh, another Kyte! Hi! Down to business. It's short, too short. Yes, it's manga, but still. And maybe: (sarcastic) It's great! It's all fine! or something like that. "Distressed" is ...

Charactes: John Nero, the author Mr. Barry, his editor John Makum An aide. Scene one: Mr. Barry's Office (Lights come one. Spotlight Mr. Barry's desk, where a manuscript lies half ...

Gosh, this is a little adult. You used the expression "the other," which I've only seen in older writers. :D Well, I like it. Are the names Eskimo, or did ...