Stori

Ok, first off this confused me. First you had a quote, they third person, then first. That's not so good. So, either name the character beforehand or start a new ...

New Claw? Alisa was just as surprised. She paced, wondering... Does it matter now if Path hears me? Can I reach just Raul? She had to try. "Hello," she ventured. ...

Thanks, all. And Ryter, hi. I'm glad you think so much of "Clone."

Am I allowed to post the "Gundam Unity" script here?

Just a thought: folks are going to get Dee and Demetri confused.

Jacob Cloral "Hala?" I asked. "What..." Then the ring shone and I saw the letter floating towards it. Just before it disappeared, Spader shouted, "Second Earth!" The letter vanished, but ...

Alisa saw the two cats, Raul and Path. "Darn," she muttered. The rules were that she could only speak to Raul personally. She decided to wait. After all, she'd been ...

Well, I guess it's a long O, not U. And yes, he's a good guy. He doesn't want to be caught in a war anymore.

Hey, wait a minute. "She then called an emergency to all the wolves in the area." If there are guards, and this is an urban area, it should be silent. ...

Lancirst, I like your name. And this was good. Can't say anything is exactly wrong.

"Hey, Jack!" "Huh?" Ubi threw an envelope. "From General Washington," he said. "Get real. It's 2007 for Pete's sake." With a hurt look, Ubi backed away. "Come on, we've been ...

Jax swore, fervently, in several languages. He didn't even care if they were swear words. Kuust poked his snout from his warren in the "manhole." "What is it? I haven't ...

Kale fired on another fighter. He was in his element: battle. The Force was a living shield, the droid fighters a pinprick against the net of space. Jaca whooped. "Yes, ...

One question: how is this "fan fiction" if it's a whole 'nother ball game?

Hey, any takers? I know the series is adult...