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Re: Faith: Prologue
I'm wondering, why doesn't Courage have a heart and lungs? Is it natural?
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 1
It's kinda hard to understand. Why is the girl out there? How come she says she wouldn't be surprised by ESP?
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Sons of Fire
Nick looked around the deserted alley. His helper should be here... He winced as his shoulder throbbed. Ordinarily, he wouldn't be out this late, and injured. But he'd gotten a ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Dark Star
Teo saw Tira and smiled. He'd met her before. "Come on in," he called. Tira acknowledged with a wave of her tail. She jumped onto a rock, then landed neatly ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: The feeling is new...
It's cool. But who is the narrator? You? A friend? A character?
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Forest Lament
A character... only I didn't get far with the story. :(
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Typical Teenagers 2
Miles wandered forlornly around the mall. He'd brought some money, but most of that was spent on the moive and pizza. Nor was there any sign of his date. "Darn," ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Love Me.
Hi Jess. Great poem! Repetition works here. Yup, it's usually discouraged, but this worked.
Oct 19, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars: Rogue Knight
Yeah, I am. I'll change the title.. should be Rogue, right?
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: City girl
Hi all. It's Kyte, for those who don't know. The story was good, yes, and the sky metaphor had a place. And I like this: "If smog was a verb, ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Finally putting pen to paper
My best advice? Try what you like. Read the genres you like. Say, fantasy. If your thing is the Wheel of Time or maybe Eragon, read those. If not, well, ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Pen name?
It's James Stuart. James for a recognizable name, Stuart because that's my town. Now, I realize too that my real name is distinctive, but what do y'all think?
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Galaxy of Stars?
It's cool. I like the second picture too.
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: So... where have I been?
Hi and welcome back! I'm Kyte, also known as Jorin. That's my real name, no kidding. So, my site name was inspired by the character from .hack. I've been Kyte ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Question
Yeah, thanks. It's a 'new side' of the movie Endless Waltz .
Oct 15, 2007
