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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Faith: Prologue

    I'm wondering, why doesn't Courage have a heart and lungs? Is it natural?

    Oct 26, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 1

    It's kinda hard to understand. Why is the girl out there? How come she says she wouldn't be surprised by ESP?

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Sons of Fire

    Nick looked around the deserted alley. His helper should be here... He winced as his shoulder throbbed. Ordinarily, he wouldn't be out this late, and injured. But he'd gotten a ...

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Archive Re: Dark Star

    Teo saw Tira and smiled. He'd met her before. "Come on in," he called. Tira acknowledged with a wave of her tail. She jumped onto a rock, then landed neatly ...

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The feeling is new...

    It's cool. But who is the narrator? You? A friend? A character?

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Lyrics Re: Forest Lament

    A character... only I didn't get far with the story. :(

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers 2

    Miles wandered forlornly around the mall. He'd brought some money, but most of that was spent on the moive and pizza. Nor was there any sign of his date. "Darn," ...

    Oct 25, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love Me.

    Hi Jess. Great poem! Repetition works here. Yup, it's usually discouraged, but this worked.

    Oct 19, 2007
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Star Wars: Rogue Knight

    Yeah, I am. I'll change the title.. should be Rogue, right?

    Oct 18, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: City girl

    Hi all. It's Kyte, for those who don't know. The story was good, yes, and the sky metaphor had a place. And I like this: "If smog was a verb, ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Writers Corner Re: Finally putting pen to paper

    My best advice? Try what you like. Read the genres you like. Say, fantasy. If your thing is the Wheel of Time or maybe Eragon, read those. If not, well, ...

    Oct 15, 2007
  • Writers Corner Re: Pen name?

    It's James Stuart. James for a recognizable name, Stuart because that's my town. Now, I realize too that my real name is distinctive, but what do y'all think?

    Oct 15, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Galaxy of Stars?

    It's cool. I like the second picture too.

    Oct 15, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: So... where have I been?

    Hi and welcome back! I'm Kyte, also known as Jorin. That's my real name, no kidding. So, my site name was inspired by the character from .hack. I've been Kyte ...

    Oct 15, 2007
  • Scripts Re: Question

    Yeah, thanks. It's a 'new side' of the movie Endless Waltz .

    Oct 15, 2007


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