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Re: The Kingdom Keepers
Yeah, it's the Disney in Florida. I'be been to all the parks. Mark looked around. "Hmm... Well, I don't see why I'm here. Everything is so quiet." Suddenly, a flurry ...
Oct 31, 2007 -
Re: Tandem Writing
Well, the Storybook forum is a good place for that. Anyone on the site can enter a storybook.
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: The Kingdom Keepers
The story: five teens were cast as DHIs, or Disney Host Interactives. These are holograms that guide vistiors through Magic Kingdom. The DHIs, led by Finn Whitman, saved the Kingdom ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Dark Star
Teo's head was whirling. His brother was here! He felt like jumping for joy, but decided instead on following Cyla into the back. Path, forgotten in the commotion, trailed them ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Pendragon
Jacob Cloral "Well, that's great. But how does this help us?" Spader paced slwoly, thinking. "I don't know as it exactly solves our problem... Maybe we could send a message ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Dark Star
Raul looked from Cyla to Teo and back. "What's this all about?" Before anyone could think of a reply, Teo blurted, "I came to see my brother!" He looked at ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Fall of the Midnight Rain
A good work. I like the theme of release and the way you presented it.
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: The Inspirational Courtyard
This reads more like prose than poetry, I think. But still, it's a good job.
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: The City at Night
Why exactly are they alone in the city? And how some grandpa doesn't show up?
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Dark Star
Hey, you read my mind. I was thinking of Cyla as a calico... Well, thanks for the post.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Among the Lost
Luke stared at the blank screen, not really seeing it. He saw Jen's face, smiling, telling him it would be all right. That they had a right to exist. And ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: I'm new to this site...
Hi, wolf. Nice to meet you.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: What Perspective Do You Like To Write In?
it depends on the story.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: A True Hero
Wow, that was cool. The theme of a hero was very well done.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: An extract from book 3 of the Inheritance trilogy
Wow, that's suspenseful. Hopefully, it will be included in the book!
Oct 28, 2007
