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Re: Airborn and Skybreaker
Yeah, I saw Treausre Planet. Story was well done, and they adapted it to space well.
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: Lord of the Rings Trilogy
I know. The Souring of the Shire and the Old Forest are important, I think. The only thing is, it would make each movie 4 or 5 hours long. I ...
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Re: Angel's Feather ch.2
Thump, thump-thump... My hear hammered in my ears. What was wrong? Sure, I'd just taken PE, but still... I couldn't think as waves of pain crashed over me. "Ben? Are ...
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Re: God Glances Down Sometimes
That was brilliant. I liked the part when it says, "the apple that even He couldn't sell."
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: Angel's Feather chapter 1
A voice was screaming in my ear: "Open your wings! No one else can save you!" What were they talking about? I didn't have any wings. I tried to shout, ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: An excerpt from NaNo
Good job, Sachiko! I loved it.
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: Hay guys!
That's cool! I like drawing too, mostly Anime characters.
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: Youga's Story
I don't know about you, but most villains in my experience don't admit that they commit crimes or that they are evil. What they do seems right to them. Anyway, ...
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Marcus and Mica ch.1
Marcus shivered and pulled up the hood of his jacket. The wind was merciless, hurling snow and ice in his face. He was tall for his age, with long limbs ...
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Photography
Awesome pictures, Maybe. I like the sunrise one.
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: A Hidden Sanctuary chp1 pt1
Where exactly is this coming from? The person has a dream, then it's the first day of school. No transition. And who exactly is this Toki fellow?
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Life Is...
It's cool. Good analogies.
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Typical Teenagers 2
Miles turned into the parking lot and stopped. There were Senna and Amber, talking quietly. "Hey," he called out, and the girls turned to face him. "Miles, right?" Amber asked. ...
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Re: Pendragon
Jacob Cloral We rode in silence for a while. It's not that there wasn't anything to say; I just didn't know where to begin. Finally Spader said, "Maybe, when we ...
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Loneliness
Japanese? You wrote this in Japanese? Wow.
Nov 2, 2007
