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Ok if I join? Name: Albel Race: Half-elf Status: Unbonded Appearance: Has jet-black hair and green eyes. His main weapons are a bow and a longsword.

Dang it, Miles swore. Too afraid to talk? Come on, boy, buck up! He kicked at a pebble and watched as it rolled into the street. "Rough day at the ...

Riiight. He went through the rest of the day without incident. Just as he was about to leave... "Hey, wait up!" It was Senna, of course. "Can't stop to talk," ...

Well, where are you exactly? And why are Senna and Miles suddenly "a couple"?

Happy Thanksgiving, Mann.

Maybe you should go back a page. Miles was on a date Saturday. No big deal. While the teacher droned on, Miles began to doodle. He drew a small, furry ...

Hello there. I don't have much to say, but... Welcome to YWS!

Possibly science fiction. I really can't think of much. Kale Hart

The language is a little dense, I think. And what is "eves ago" supposed to mean?

Miles heard a muted giggle behind him. He ignored it until someone tapped him on the shoulder. Annoyed, he spun around. "What is it?" he hissed. "Mr. Keyston, would you ...

Nice job! Maybe you could draw him in wolf form too?

Well, I know absolutely nothing about sonnets, so I can't offer much. This was well written and gets the point across.

This sounds like a retelling of Frankenstein. Which is a good thing.

Hi Tracks.

Good work Adam! I love the tower and the blue starfield.