Stori

Just out of curiosity, what does your name stand for?

Don't forget, punctuation goes inside the quotes.

How come you turned it upside down?

Interesting. Maybe a comedy? Angel's Feather.

Nice job. I like the warrior pictures best.

Wow. That blew me away. The second part threw me, thought. What are you trying to accomplish?

Talk about a rough life.

I think it's good work. What inspired you to write this?

I'll do my thinking anywhere. Usually it's when I'm alone. I don't like noise at all .

Good work, and welcome to the site.

Good job.

It's a good start. But maybe you should give more description of the characters, what they look like, how they think, that sort of thing.

Well, it certainly is interesting. I don't know why, but about the main character, I kept thinking, "Zidane.'

Sometimes I think of something right away. Sometimes, like they said, I just put any title on the doccument. You really shouldn't worry about a title. Just write.

I would drop the capitals on "bird." It's just a bird, right?