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Re: Him
Let me say, I absolutely love this poem (which is how I star all my replies to poems that I absolutely love). I feel enormous empathy to this girl (I ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Asymmetrical Confrontation
I do like this poem, because it shows the true nature of "Pleasant Dishonesty". People try to be nice by lying, which shows that they don't think that you deserve ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Splattered Poetry
My poem isn’t a song— it isn’t supposed to rhyme. And it isn’t supposed to be read aloud. It isn’t supposed to be pure, heartfelt, or even particularly beautiful. It ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Life Cycle Of A Helium Balloon
I like this poem-- it is an interesting way to describe an ordinary object. I mean, not just anyone looks at a balloon and thinks, "Hey, what an interesting balloon. ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Heart-To-Heart
I love how you stepped into the heads of two lovers, and took note of their feelings. This is beautiful and sweet.
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Sinking
Pretty. I like the ending. It definitely showed the happiness behind what there is. It reminds me of so many quotes... But still, the symbolism, the metaphors... they really add ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Friends in Flesh
The scars in my flesh have almost disappeared, it’s true— The marks of my confusion The whispered words behind friendly hands And the secrets kept by a small pocketknife. The ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: In the Waiting Room
Very beautiful metaphors. I love the writing style- it's very cryptic, leaving the readers to guess what it means. Wonderful.
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Six Love Questions
This is beautiful. Such a wonderful message of love-- and little kids are always good for inspiration. If these are the answers you gave, that little one will be very ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Literary Fantasies
I love it. This speaks to my inner fantasy nerd. :) Because there is no better vacation from reality than through imagination!
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: As She Wakes
I woke up in the dark. I always wake up in the dark. This morning, however, was different. I’d had a dream that was Quite rudely interrupted By my alarm ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Camp Demi-God
Alright, I totally love this. I claim a female for Aphrodite. ;)
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Confessions Of A Wallflower
This is absolutely brilliant-- I love the last line. You really managed to get into the head of the girl who is assumed to have no actual personality. The last ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Uh... *Insert Title Here*
Yeah. My name is Stitches. Not really, but I'm not gonna give you freaks my real name. So yeah, artist, writer, otaku, and schtuff like that. Apparently I'm supposed to ...
Nov 20, 2011
