StingDaFling

This is a beautiful poem. I'm pretty sure you didn't focus on the technical aspects of the poem or try to create any rhyme scheme, but the poem itself makes ...

I decided to take 20 minutes to make a short poem since I don't have any of my works here yet. The last stanza might be a little messed up, ...

I used to be a nonbeliever, 9 * I doubted every notion, 6 We can’t just slap hearts on a wall, 8 Or create it with a potion. 7 ** ...

The overuse of spacing and lines kind of threw me off a little bit. Other then that, a few irrelevant rhymes/transitions("nothing" doesn't rhyme with "something," and sounds rather weird to ...

but the childish discovery of these petty phrases are a childhood and teenage love. This completely threw me off the poem; I don't know why. The number of syllables changed ...

I'm going to start by saying that I throughly enjoyed it solely because it's so true. Quite the interesting topic you chose, and executed rather well. Also, the title of ...

It's a very interesting poem, I might say. I loved the first stanza, but the rest of it didn't make too much sense to me. It's probably because you're supposed ...

Very easy on the brain to read. I like that in a poem.. You probably should have put quotation marks ( "" ) around "Take a hint, okay?" because you ...

The grammar has to be the thing the threw me off the most. I couldn't manage to get much of a feel of the poem because of the choppiness of ...

Ah! A poet! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, lovely to meet you! I'm more of a prose person myself, but I used to dabble in poetry. Very fun stuff. Are ...

Hallo there! I'm Ash! :D So, I can ask you a few questions... let's see... Well of course the most obvious; What do you read? What do you write? If ...

Hey there. To get to the point, I'm quite a writer to my family so my sister (gigirl942) told me to sign up. I guess I'll like it here. Nice, ...