Stillgrave

The first thing I would like to point out, I don't know if it is a formatting error ot not, but there should be more space between the different dialogue ...

Thanks Matt :) Fixed those then, spelling has never been my forte.

I do not yet have a title for this, but this is the opening part of the prologue. I have only used the ms word spell checker so please do ...

Hello and welcome, though I am not sure that we shall talk overtly much due to the fact that fan fiction is not something that I myself write. However, welcome ...

Thank you, the stories that I am presently writing are all tied together but yet are of different genres in away. All would more than likely be listed as science-fiction ...

My wife pointed out to me that I apparently forgot to include what good I thought of her story. Might have been a copy/paste problem on my end as I ...

For those who know Kel, I shall say first and foremost that I am her husband in real life. Yes, I also write as well and even though I did ...

Haroun-rän stood and stared out at the horizon, following the path of a wheeling vulture with his eyes; Nathu played uneasily with the hem of his tunic and glared at ...

Sorry if I sound a bit picky, I am... I know. First thing is that the dialogue lost me, completely. The start of the dialogue was fine (BTW, anyone know ...

Ryal gestured with a flapping hand to a stall of shellfish. The ridged facades of clams glinted in the early afternoon sun, scales of fishes flashing as they passed. Bright ...

The smug smirk of the over confident graced Ryal's thin lips. Seems a bit off to me, I'd suggest using "The smug smirk of over confidence graced Ryal's thin lips." ...