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Happy Birthday Jesus! Lately, I've been thinking about you. And everyone trying to make it without you. I know plenty here who doubt you. And even more who complain about ...

It’s been awhile since I’ve seen you smile and my heart breaks for you this pain I can’t undo I know you’re thinking it through and trying to decide whats ...

Been down this road before Dead ends at another locked door Can't ever tell if its the same one as before Although it probably is I'm pretty sure So I'm ...

Thanks for the review. I was pretty sure it wouldn't make much sense to anyone at all. It was fun to write and I hope it was fun to read. ...

Gonna take the world hostage and feed everyone sausage until you read my poetry and explain it all to me. Girl interrupted when you erupted they said you self destructed ...

Thank you. I enjoyed reading what you got out of it. Your suggestions were helpful and I've never really thought of choosing the rhythm quite that way before. Thanks again ...

This feels so honest.

I really like this. I loved the opening and the idea of them living happily ever after. I loved the passion of the racing and the running and how they ...

Thanks for the review. I am terrible with punctuation. I'll clean it up. I'm not sure how to change the line at the end of the first stanza. It says ...

Thank you for your review. I've lost so many people to drug abuse and to be honest I detest it. Thanks again!

In the palm of the hand of the outstretched arm of the Father of Lies I find Happiness Treacherous and Volatile Without End Possessing the Power to imprison in Sorrow, ...

Thanks I will attempt a rewrite. I think you're right about the message not being clear enough. During the time I was writing it, I was dripping my heart onto ...

Thank you so much for the reviews. Very Helpful. Rachel ~ I thought it was short too but it said everything I wanted it to, so I ended it. Jabber ...

I really liked this. "I can hear the smile on your face,when you laugh out loud." Was my favorite line. Why is anyone ever in a hurry to grow up?

Allow me to introduce myself, Physician prescribed hazard to your health. Need an escape? I'm the gate I accept all applicants and never discriminate Make this move and it’s no ...