SteviexOctopus

This is good, but a bit confusing. That might just be me though. The only major thing I saw was that big paragraph, whenever someone new speaks there should be ...

Thanks Smaur! I edited it, and now I hope it's better and not so boring. (cuz I broke my own rule about that) haha... anyways thanks, the review was fantastic! ...

Author's Note: Finding the first chapter shouldn't be much trouble since I changed the subject title of it. This used to be called January. (And I probably should mention that ...

Will you please review this? Many thanks! - Stevie

Paradox Parade - Chapter One: It's basically the beginning of Evelyn's extremely confusing and random adventure to save her sister. (Sorry, I don't have a better Summary.) I mostly want ...

Thanks everyone, but I've finally come up with a title. =] It's Now called Paradox Parade. Thanks again.

Sounds like a story about children or truth. Maybe antiques, tea-sets or something of that nature. If the cover art was good, I might pick it up. I'm going to ...

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I'm guessing it's either a puppy love story or a story about a sick puppy that brings the whole community to join together and saves it. I probably wouldn't pick ...

1) Novel a - Fantasy b - over 1,207 now 2) Title 3) Somewhat See for more info: For the 1st Chapter: Thank you =]

I need a title for my novel. Right now I'm calling it January, simply because it takes place, mostly, in January. But I don't feel that it fits my novel. ...

Blink - Thanks =] I'm glad it's not terribly long. When I change the title I'm going to change it here as well, so hopefully people won't be too confused. ...

Author's Note : Q: What's your opinion on the Baby Backpack? (Not ideal for a teenager? is it too weird? etc.) (This was previously called January) Your welcome to be ...

Gosh, this piece makes me want to paint. XD It's beautifully written yet it's missing something, at least in the way prologues go. I think it would be cool to ...