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It's pretty good. I really enjoyed reading it. I have a question though: Have you read the Mortal Instruments? Because your story sounds strangely similar... :smt003 Okay so I've compiled ...

Thanks Lauren! *feels a little OC for commenting back right away* XD I'll think about expanding it, and I'm glad you liked it enough to suggest that I expand it. ...

I think this is the first short story I've ever written just because... Any who, feel free to be harsh! =] - - - The looking glass mirror hanging over ...

Man, your main character is whiny! Yes that was my first thought when reading this. My second was I wonder where this is heading because I expect whiny characters to ...

In times like these I have to quote E.L. Doctorow: Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. I'm not a schizophrenic, but I do have people who 'live' in ...

You know you're a writer when being around paper, books, pens or pencils makes you feel better. (True story) You know you're a writer when you're religious about what you ...

I'm ShotgunFreedom.

I'm soo ready! ... but only in a 'I want to write' sense... though I think I got most of my plotting done. =D I just have to organize everything ...

Yay! Someone responds! =D Thanks, umm... yeah I have been trying to write for myself but writing is not fun unless your comfy, not too comfy but just enough that ...

I picked novel because I've been working on a novel forever... but have been feeling the epic failness of never finishing one in all this time... plus I have have ...

I've been running this story through my head for a long time now, and I have yet to get down to writing it. I figure the reason for this is ...

Depending on the genre I would read on. If it's just regular fiction I wouldn't but if it was fantasy or something like a series of unfortunate events, I would ...

First off I have to say that this is an amazing piece! No seriously, I loved the idea and the characters, but of course you came here for a review ...

This is pretty good, is this supposed to be a Prologue? Because that's what it seems to be. I don't have much to say about grammar or spelling, but I ...

The title is probably going to be changed. Also, I have a question for the reviewers to answer (besides the usual review... the question, is, of course, optional) 1.) Do ...