Stephixy

I think this poem has a good concept, and good wording. I think however that it could use a bit more structure. I'm not sure where these changes could be ...

okay so I'm thinking of re-doing my second chapter now. I have time since I am finished with school. I will pry start work on it tomorrow. I know of ...

I fixed it! Guys it took me a bit (what with work, school, and a social life) but I got the first chapter fully edited and updated. Go ahead and ...

Thanks for the suggestions guys! I am in the process of reviving this story. I started writing this 7 years ago (yeah I was 12) so it's not near up ...