Stella_Grrl

wow nothing to critique at all! this poem really paints a unique picture in my mind... totally in love with this! i shall award you a gold star and add ...

ooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love it! i wanna read more though i think this is a great prologue (sp) whos the dark figure? how old is yuki now? what's gonna happen? *strokes ...

I really love this poem... It's so beautiful and well written. Like the person above me said the words jump right off the page. I can see what your words ...

This is a totally and completely and amzing story! I love it xD I would definitely give you an A. The only problems I have with teh story are when ...

I really like it although I was slightly confused at the beginning. Why not tell us or show us what happened instead of just right into it? I didn't really ...

Wow. Truthfully I can't find anything wrong with this piece except correct the spelling of L O V E. Lol! The only other thing I would probably say is that ...

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wow it's so beautiful it really made me want to cry....it's so deep and emotional! it's sad and yet true.child abuse happens everyday you should be proud of your poem! ...

I'm in love with this poem! Me personally, I prefer my poems to be depressing. I'm not sure why but that's just me. Everything just seems to fit together like ...

BEAUTIFUL! I really enjoyed reading this. It flows very well and it has a very distict message to me. =] Keep it up!

ummm....i'm new! obviously. lol not sure what exactly i'm supposed to say? talk about myself or ask questions i guess...yes i talk to myself very often and i tend to ...