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Re: S.N.I.P.E.Rs Prologue
You talk like this is the first time I have written hehe. (1) As for the Matrix that was what I compared my dream to and is in no way ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Death Machine: Chapter One
No problem. :)
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter five part one
Ok I have finally been able to edit this now that I have fixed my computer. (Virus attack) Anyway this is just a quick edit and I am going to ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four (12+ Version)
That shouldn’t be too hard. When my internet comes back online I will be able to find a point to split it. At the moment I am having light writer’s ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: A Dark Hero: Blurb and Prologue
Ok I have gone through and edited out what has been pointed out. Unfortunately my internet is down so I properly won’t be able to upload anything, for at least ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four prologue
I might take longer to finish off some other stuff, (for real life) so I decided to post a little bit more. __________________________________________________________________________________________ T
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
“Black Wolf” tape recorder recording. Wednesday 11.08.3472 08:52 Sol system Earth By Sol, did you mean solar? As in solar system? Ok I have gone over and edited chapter three ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Christmas Day 1914
Only thing I found odd, was the use of forward slashes to separate the stanzas. Just leave a bit of space! It looks neater too! Strangely the spaces haven’t come ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter two
Ok thanks Amy. Part three is already up but I will try and improve in part four. Unfortunately people don’t tend to comment about improvements etc. From what I have ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 6 of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall.
No problem.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter two
Thanks Coco. I'm glad it is liked. :D
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter one
Hey. I think McMourning pretty much covered the grammar, but if you want to PM me I'll be glad to help you with the punctuation rules and all that jazz. ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter one
Warp is a term that comes from Star Trek . In real life, it's called FTL (faster than light). Certainly, it's a more recognizable term, though. And, a rift drive ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) prologue
Ok I thought I would post some background on the three races involved in that battle. Races Lizarian Home world: Lizaria Description: Green scaled humanoid lizards that have orange slit ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) prologue
Ok thanks, I will consider continuing it after I finish off Shadow Flight. Glad you liked it. All the best.
Nov 13, 2009
