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Stealth_Slicer

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: S.N.I.P.E.Rs Prologue

    You talk like this is the first time I have written hehe. (1) As for the Matrix that was what I compared my dream to and is in no way ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Death Machine: Chapter One

    No problem. :)

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) Chapter five part one

    Ok I have finally been able to edit this now that I have fixed my computer. (Virus attack) Anyway this is just a quick edit and I am going to ...

    Mar 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four (12+ Version)

    That shouldn’t be too hard. When my internet comes back online I will be able to find a point to split it. At the moment I am having light writer’s ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Dark Hero: Blurb and Prologue

    Ok I have gone through and edited out what has been pointed out. Unfortunately my internet is down so I properly won’t be able to upload anything, for at least ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) Chapter four prologue

    I might take longer to finish off some other stuff, (for real life) so I decided to post a little bit more. __________________________________________________________________________________________ T

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three

    “Black Wolf” tape recorder recording. Wednesday 11.08.3472 08:52 Sol system Earth By Sol, did you mean solar? As in solar system? Ok I have gone over and edited chapter three ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Christmas Day 1914

    Only thing I found odd, was the use of forward slashes to separate the stanzas. Just leave a bit of space! It looks neater too! Strangely the spaces haven’t come ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) chapter two

    Ok thanks Amy. Part three is already up but I will try and improve in part four. Unfortunately people don’t tend to comment about improvements etc. From what I have ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Chapter 6 of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall.

    No problem.

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) chapter two

    Thanks Coco. I'm glad it is liked. :D

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) chapter one

    Hey. I think McMourning pretty much covered the grammar, but if you want to PM me I'll be glad to help you with the punctuation rules and all that jazz. ...

    Nov 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) chapter one

    Warp is a term that comes from Star Trek . In real life, it's called FTL (faster than light). Certainly, it's a more recognizable term, though. And, a rift drive ...

    Nov 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) prologue

    Ok I thought I would post some background on the three races involved in that battle. Races Lizarian Home world: Lizaria Description: Green scaled humanoid lizards that have orange slit ...

    Nov 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) prologue

    Ok thanks, I will consider continuing it after I finish off Shadow Flight. Glad you liked it. All the best.

    Nov 13, 2009


I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
— Vladmir Nabokov