Starrywolf

Spilling Ink by... Wow, I forgot who wrote it... xD

I listen to songs that match the story. Like for Embrace the Madness, I turn on Green Day (I usually keep replaying "Before the Lobotomy" for that specific story.) For ...

Firstly, I like your writing style. At least as this character, the style seemed to give an essence of familiarity. The story seemed to move at a nice pace, and ...

Like the other commenters,I enjoyed the imagery. With the misspelling of what I assume to be "because," was it done on purpose? The last stanza kind of broke the rhythm ...

It's hard to decide. Obese children are going to be bullied, if not in elementary school then definitely in high school. And if you were a business owner, would you ...

I liked it! I could almost hear them singing it (though you probably imagined it differently,) and it seemed to flow well.

I love the idea! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes, and I really don't see anything negative to point out. I like how you made the story more spread out, ...

My parents would never let me have one. Ever. :|

That single bullet almost instantly paralysed me waist down. Almost? I thought he was in a wheelchair? This totally contradicts what you say about him being in a wheelchair and ...

-Disclaimer- I do not have schizophrenia, I do not know how they actually think. This is my interpretation of some symptoms- Grammar mistakes such as sentence structure are made on ...

I find this poem short and blunt, but in a good way. It gets the point across without all of the extra elements. Sometimes poetry is all about balance: sometimes ...

Hi. I'm new, of course. People can call me whatever they want, I really don't care. Starry, maybe? Anyway, glad to be here. (I don't like using exclamation points when ...