Starrywolf

Wallflower Name: Gage Russell Denning Age: 17 Gender: Male Tutor: Dustin Appearance: His hair is a natural brown color, but he dies it black. He’s not the hardcore type, no ...

Age: 16 Gender: Male Name and subject number: Sebastian, subject 230. Appearance: He has ear-length brown hair, and his eyes are hazel. His skin is naturally very pale. He doesn't ...

“Your breath e is unstable, your current temperature is thirty-nine point two degrees celsiu s . Immediate medical care and rest is advised.” A soft female voice resounds in my ...

Doctor Who, Psych, and Bones. As of right now, if I had to pick one- Bones.

Sorry it took me so long to comment. I'm going to do a full, harsh review instead of passively fixing grammar mistakes this time, so don't be mad at me ...

I didn't notice any grammar issues, so we'll skip that. And now I'll actually read instead of skim. :) The first three scentences don't really seem to flow. I think ...

I don't think the last poster missed anything, so I can can skip the nitpicky part. I find that when things have a ton of punctuation, ("...NO!!") it kind of ...

So, umm... Idea. PM. You all know the drill. Idea: The United States is at war- this time, in their own territory. A group of people are hiding in an ...

I'm in too lazy a mood to do a full, nitpicky review. Maybe when you post more? Because I REALLY hope you do. I love the story so far- really. ...

I don't see any grammar mistakes (but I think my mind may have went numb after editing for a friend) or punctuatio/capitalization so I think we can skip the nitpicking. ...

Okay, First is nitpicky time! :) A glorious smile rose on his face, like the morning sun across the eastern sky. I just thought that that sentence didn't go very ...

That was great! I haven't read much second person writing, so I'm not exactly the expert on it, but I think you pulled that off well. I didn't notice any ...

Like the above posters said, a couple issues with capitalization/punctuation. I love the voice, I could almost hear it being read out loud. Nice word choice, flow... Not much to ...

Well, it depends on how I get the idea. My ideas come in pictures. For example, I've been working on this Stephen King-like story about a small fishing town. The ...

Like some others above, I listen to music that matches the pace/mood of the story. I find the the music I use most is Green Day, Linkin Park, Led Zeppelin, ...