Starrywolf

How do you see me? Am I weird, not normal gross, ugly, strange or informal The stanza should end with a question mark. The rhyme seems nice and natural, well ...

This is for the "Dear Somebody" contest. I think the sentence flow is a little choppy, so any suggestions would be great. Dear Mr. Smith, I’m sorry for contacting you, ...

“I’m just not sure what it is, exactly.” “Perhaps if I…give it a nudge? Perhaps…it’ll move?” “No, no, you might upset it, should it be a dangerous animal.” This is ...

Sorry for taking so long, it slipped my mind! The opening paragraph was very symbolic and metaphorical. This is good in small doses, but remember that the reader has to ...

Done and done!

Like the posters above, I can feel the emotion in this piece. It's short, but still gives a connection with the reader- that's some real skill there. I love, LOVE ...

I love the way it's organized and formatted. Very attention-grabbing and works well with the story. I also like the story- an easy, short, and interesting read is always welcome. ...

Remember to capitalize the beginnings of sentences. whats hi * What's hi? (note caps and question mark) Punctuation is nice too. It's a nice little poem. Maybe use some synonyms ...

The scout would probably try to convince them it was an illusion or something. Memory-erasing would be emergencies only.

It's a very beautiful poem, and you definitely succeeded in your goal. Like one of the commenters above, I really loved the last two lines. They really had a great ...

T he offices of The Detroit Chronicle were out-dated and out of place. Once a prominent feature in the city’s skyline, the 1930s building which housed Michigan’s most popular daily ...

Hey, writers! I, being incredibly lazy, have trouble making myself review. But I know I'll do it if someone's waiting for me, so here we are. I'll review anything. Anything ...

The... story? Nope. My cousin watches Psych too. It's partly inspired by the Yin/Yang ones.

Resa A few minutes after I called for a scout, Kael showed up. "Yeah?" "A cress made a lot of noise before it managed to kill it. Not sure if ...

Okay.