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That's incredible! Shiney, you never surprise me because whenever I see your dragon drawings, they always amaze me for how creative they look and those super accurate designs even add ...

Wow! That was amazing and very deep. When I decided to read this, at first I had the impression it is going to be long and boring but I would ...

Your writing skills have made the story admiring and tolerable to be read by a someone like me who might have seen that sort of mystery-stories a lot on TV ...

Love how deep your article is. You seem to write about a subject that rarely anyone would write about, which is how every person should share their thoughts and secrets ...

I enjoyed reading this piece, probably because it was so well-written or maybe I just like the subject of animal hunting that your were talking about. Question: Where is Part ...

Wonderful story, though sounding quite sad, but I see it meaningful and very deep. I like the simplicity of words you've used in your story, the small details (like the ...

Well first of all, I'd like to give my opinion on your friend's incomplete story. He/She had given an interesting introduction which would make the reader feeling curious about the ...

I think the way you've written the story was a good choice. I love how your story carries all those emotions despite of the simplicity of the writing. So well ...

What a shocking ending! :O One thing I'd wish that it was mentioned in your story is what reason(s) that made them separate? Your story ending shows that Priya had ...

Brianna, you definitely need to copy all the story and paste it into Microsoft Word and you will see an endless number of words underlined with green. You need to ...

I like the idea of your story; the parents' selfish mistakes and how the children pay for it later. Here are a few things I'd like to comment on: > ...

I was pretty excited to go read your short story after seeing your wall post in the Islam Central club. Though I can barely remember anything about the 7/7 attacks ...

This is interesting. If that spoiler wasn't there, I would have been quite shocked by the ending "I woke up" = ) The story (or the start of it) is ...

watching them playing from the porch, But Jerome had was too afraid to admit his feelings to Alice, They had written letters, many letters, longer than the roads that separated ...

I was getting annoyed to (no need for a comma) this happened every morning even on Saturdays and Sundays, But no , my mum always finds a way to get ...