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Starleene

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​​​Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir

    Whoa. Can that be my review? Just whoa. That was so beautifully written! I've read a lot of works on here, some good some bad but not many as well ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Battle Dress

    Hai there, Cairo! So I read this yesterday, thought I reviewed it, but I guess not. My bad. Well here I am to correct this dire mistake. I can't even ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Whodunit

    Hey there! I literally have one critique. Someday replies Pretty sure you meant "Somebody" since that's his name. That's all I have. But I would like to leave some comments. ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Case of Blowout

    Hey there fortis, I am here to give you what little review I can. Pretty much all I can say is that this is awesome. I would never have thought ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1

    Hai there, Socks! Star here to give you a bit of a review! I really didn't find to much to critique punctuation or grammar wise. These are just a few ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: In the minority

    Hai there Cat! It would be my pleasure to review this lovely piece! Onward: i'm amazed at her beauty. Just capitalize the I in I'm. Really nothing but just something ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Untitled - Intro - Breathe

    Hey Zar! So just a simple review here! Thought I would attempt to clear out some pieces in the Greenroom :D Just behind everything out I'm not sure if it's ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black Clouds Chapter One

    Hai there! Star here to leave you a review! (Look at me, I can rhyme!) Onward: while my brother Drew tries to tell jokes If they were talking about someone ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Drama

    Hey there Awesome! OK let's get started! you cook up the roomers I think you mean rumors. :) Just a simple spelling mistake and easy to fix up! Otherwise, I ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The never ending journey.

    Hai there, Star here to dish out a review! First of before I begin I want to say that this was so beautiful. It was so emotional and it brought ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: red oak trees

    Star here for a review! I think I cried when I read this poem. No seriously I did. It was heart felt and honestly I felt what the character was ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Supernatural Re: The Zombies of Xavier Lane

    Rhydia dear! I saw this and knew I had to review it. In hind sight, that seams pointless because this piece was masterfully written. When I first saw The Zombies ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Small Fire

    Hey there Skylarembers! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first post *claps* We might as well jump right in since I mentioned it but don't worry, it won't hurt ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    This is such a beautiful poem I had to read it twice. I'm not to find of rhyming poems myself because many people can't get the beats right but this ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Laughing-Stock

    Hi there Fortis! Starleene here to review this wonderful piece! So why don’t we get started? She can make anything a different color than what it is. I feel like ...

    Jun 1, 2013


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes