Starhunter

I really enjoyed this poem! Your words instantly conjured pictures in my mind- I especially like how you referenced both objects and colors, it made it much more real in ...

Wow, what a good read! A quick story that really captures the mythological character of Loki well, in my opinion. I feel that it really does a good job of ...

Thank you for the feedback, everyone! I really appreciate it. I've been planning on writing this for a while, but I never felt it until just recently. Your comments and ...

Hey, thanks for your review! You're right about the italicizing- I'll fix that. As for the last paragraph, I don't know why that's in a different font. It must have ...

Thanks for your review! I don't know how I did it... I've just been planning this scene for a long time, and I was just really feeling it, you know? ...

Oh yes, there's much more to come... :)

Hey! Cool, a spy story. :) Very interesting, and spy-ish. I like the tone you used- it makes your narrator seem very professional and like he really knows what he's ...

Hey! Okay, so here are my thoughts.. I really like the voice you're using. It's very personal, and it's easy to connect with. I feel like I just met Avelyn ...

Thanks everybody for the input! I really appreciate it! :)

Wow- thanks so much you guys for all your input! It really helps! I am doing my best to keep writing, and actually I'm near the end... although that could ...

Yes, that helps, thanks! Ha, my problem is Iulia is older, she's just not very... mature, I suppose. Matronly she is most definetly not. She is used to always getting ...

I have a question though- does anyone have any ideas about how to get across Iulia's age? She's actually quite young, and I just want to get that across... she ...

I hope they even out... I keep getting stuck, at which point I go back and work on backstory! Or other parts I skipped before. Luna and Rima aren't linked ...

Yeah, there is a lot of backstory that has yet to be presented... Miirsti (where the Queen lives now) isn't actually her home, and as for marrying the King, it ...

Ah! I know, that's always the danger of using someone else's POV to introduce a main character. Rima's important-ish, but I just haven't done anything with her yet... in the ...