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Re: Will critique everything ...
Kitty's done, DM I'll do now.
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]
Hey there, I'll be giving this a full critique when I'm less shattered, but for now you'll just have to make do with a few preliminary comments/questions: 1. Out of ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Night is Early Yet
Hey there -- my comments are in bold . The Night is Early Yet Listless in her early death, the painted face has colour yet with green bouquets and purple ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Ordinary
I frankly can't stand anything that's not running old-fashioned text. E-mail infested story, for example? I can't stand them. Horrid. ... Innovative writing? Macabre. Apparently not my cup of tea ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: It's time to revolutionise.
Thanks all for your welcomes, I'll make the effort to be a little nicer in my critiques here than I have been in the past (: Stella Thomas: Pleasure to ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Will critique everything ...
... Save, perhaps, non-fiction. We need to get our reviewing standard on par with other writer's sites in order to progress as a community, and I am more than willing ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Ordinary
This is a lovely idea, and you've pulled it off well -- as a result I have hardly any comments to make, but take note anyway: Lets press ourlipstogether and ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: It's time to revolutionise.
Hey everyone, I've been watching YWS, YWO and TW for a while now and, although I found this layout the most efficient, I'm not hugely impressed with your critiquing standard. ...
Apr 4, 2010
