Staggy11

Wow. The hardest decision that I have to make is which to comment on first. Both parts are superb, truly superb. I love the imagery of the first section, especially ...

Shouldn't there be a comma after "oh"? I'm no grammar queen or anything, but I think there should be. I don't think there has to be, but I'll be damned ...

I'm guessing you were talking about doctors and professors and the like here? It should be 'letters before their names' then. Thanks for that. I thought the format was "Prof. ...

This is a small story opening that I wrote the other day, and I'm still not sure what to do with it next. But first I'd like to iron out ...

Oh very nice. Very nice indeed. The last little twist at the end, the flowing style, all of it well crafted. " though rancid was probably a more fitting adjective" ...

I have never been a fan of first-person narrative, for the simple reason that it seems far too similar to someone giving an idea for a tale, rather than the ...

I'm into writing, although it's a rare ocasion when anything gets finished. I'm mainly into fantasy and Sci-fi, although I enjoy other genres as well. I also enjoy sketching, even ...