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Haha thanks guys. :) I'm glad I decided not to.

I'm so happy you wrote this. If only everyone on the internet had as much reason. :P

Hi CannonBall! So, I like this. The syntax, in my opinion adds to the poem. I saw where you said that what you've posted is from Italian, so I won't ...

*my apologies, it posted twice.*

Thanks for the advice, everyone. I posted another essay. If you guys had the free time, I'd really appreciate the comments. Thank you again! Leslie/Spork

Okay, guys, thanks very much for your input! I didn't really understand why my teacher emphasized more narrative essays as college essays, because I was originally thinking what you all ...

I only just saw this: English is not my mother tongue, That makes sense. Also, your written English is wonderful; I couldn't tell you weren't a native speaker. But now ...

Oh, right. It's due December 15th. Thank you very much! :D

I'm applying to the University of Maine (it's my safety school), I'll be attending the College of Liberal Arts and Sciences and, if I'm accepted, the Honors College in conjunction ...

AH! You responded! Thank you very much! I love when people whose pieces I review let me know what they think. :D And disagreeing is completely fine---unfortunately, I haven't read ...

I got your message so I toddled on over here to check it out. Sooo.... Yes, the ending is great! I really like it. Good job in the revision, Kyou! ...

I thought of something like that! :D I edited it already.

Oh! I see what you mean. And I don't mind the nitpicks at all. It's helpful. Hahaha. xD

I fixed it, would you guys mind looking at it and telling me what you think? :D

Thanks for the reviews. :D ...How terrible would it be if I told you I'd never heard of senryu before today? :smt107 I think I'm going to blame my crappy ...