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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When no-one is around

    I found this more amusing than serious. It was well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up :D

    May 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.

    Agreed. THIS. WAS. BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Messages

    Other than the punctuation (already dealt with) I really liked this poem. Keep up the good work :)

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Resentment

    I liked the poem but the fractured lines took away from the emotion and I felt that there should have been more imagery used.

    May 3, 2011


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro