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Re: Sea Of Green
I liked this piece of work it has a few bumps but altogether a fine job and clearly is related to your feelings towards a girl. Which is nice to ...
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Re: Sea Of Green
Thanks for the input. I'm used to freeverse and this was an assignment where I had to have it somewhat it was a bit uncomfortable for me. A lot of ...
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Re: Créo (I create)
Very short and sweet, with a bit of pretention sprinkled in :) I think you summarized the "get in, get out without being hurt" mentality people feel in relationships; it's ...
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Re: A Suicide Note
Dear Heart, you beat for the wrong people. You turned plastic into gold and made voices ring inside my ears until eventually I went crazy. Wow...I'm glad this isn't how ...
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Re: To Say Something<3
[quoteIf you are a constant memory,And Love never fades, then we've gotta be,][/quote] I could definitely hear this put to music and sang...being as such, I don't think this is ...
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Re: Voices
I wave as he flies into the world of cerulean. I love the imagery of this poem, very sensory-oriented, especially this line. I'd love to know what inspired this.
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Re: Sea Of Green
She reminded me of nature's indifference Blowing in the wind Her body carved into the sky Like twisting trails Directional changes based on the weather's moods: Calm breezes make her ...
Jun 2, 2010
