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Re: Shift (Chapter 3)
Hi! I like your story quite a bit, so here's your review! Well, I won't go deep into spelling and grammar mistakes. Instead I'll talk about general things like pace ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Ragnarok-and Roll 1
Nice job! The title is quite witty, I must agree. And it was written well overall, with good description and dialogue when they were talking on the phone. I must ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: This Christmas, let's end our lives part I
Well, I'm not exactly going to review it. It's good, but she's not going to commit suicide is she? 'Cos it's not exactly a nice way to end a story ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Angels
Well, I myself am hopeless at writing these kinds of stories. And I don't usually enjoy reading them, but this was fantastic . You used everything that a professional uses, ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: high school drama
Well, it would be pretty good! But as the other reviewers (whose names I can't be bothered to check) said, you need to fix up your grammar and spelling etc. ...
May 2, 2009