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Re: Chapter 1 of what I hope to be a novel
I like what you built in the first chapter, you set a perfect kind of introductory scene which was just begging to be destroyed. You've introduced your main character quite ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Making A Killing
I'm not sure what it was about the script, but it just didn't hold my interest. You're obviously a good writer and you can pick that up by reading your ...
Jun 7, 2008
