Spitfire

Thanks for the reviews guys :) Icy: I honestly have no idea how many chapters there'll be. I know what's going to happen and all, so there's at least another ...

Aaaaaaaaah! *confused* No, Emma, I was saying that I made a typo mistake. I'd meant to say Ryder and wrote Stryder instead.. :P By the way RH, why dis you ...

I know, that was a typo mistake. But it still makes me think of him!

Okay, I started reading this, but I haven't finished it yet and I'm leaving now. So sorry jash, it won't be finished today, but I will get back to it ...

Awww. Thanks everybody for the reviews! I realize there's a lot not clear, so thanks for the help :D Just to clear something up. When the driver checks his pulse, ...

Okay, I don't have time to review right now (kinda still in school) but I'll get to it afterwards!

Thanks Lauren! And you're right; it does seem to get repetitive. I hadn't even noticed, lol. I was going to add a little attack in there somewhere, but it goes ...

No problem. I really do think it would be better, especially as your chapters are still in short stories. If you go in the tab Submit, you can learn how ...

Okey dockey. Just read the added paragraphs. Pretty good. Pretty darn good. :P His amber eyes glowed with a savage inner fire as his gaze remained still. She could feel ...

Thanks everyone for the great reviews, it's really helping me out :D YUP?! You just made out with him and all you can say is yup?! Italics for thoughts? This ...

I'm back 8) Usually this is the part where I do a thorough nit-picking. Well I find myself in no need for such a thing. I didn't see any mistakes, ...

Lol, emma. Try as you two might, you ain't getting any answers from me :P And yeah, I'm going to finish it during my winter break, it's my top priority ...

Actually, I can tell you. The big twist is at the before last chapter of the book :D

LOL XD !! I wasn't actually expecting you to reread everything :P But you might've mentioned it to me vocally, I honestly don't remember. All I remember is reading/hearing you ...

I already gave you a hint; something you already suspected is a big part of the story. It's not my problem you don't remember what :P *grins evilly*