Spitfire

Hey there Bailey! Spitfire to the review rescue 8) (I know, kinda lame) Suddenly, in the night, a Light flickered. On, then off, then on again. Its power driving back ...

Oh yes! You heard me! Spitfire's on sale! But not in the way you think; I'm not selling myself, only my services. Which ones? you might ask. Well as a ...

Actually, Emma, I heard it first.. muhahahaha 8) She actually got the idea from a dream, told me about it the next morning since she was sleeping over at my ...

No problem. I really do think it would be better, especially as your chapters are still in short stories. If you go in the tab Submit, you can learn how ...

All right! As I said, I shall review! As everyone else seems to have found the typo mistakes, I'll just forget about them. No need to repeat them. I do ...

I honestly think you should post them separately. People don't usually like to have to review like 2-3 chapters at the same time. Also, when posting chapters for a novel, ...

Okey dockey. Just read the added paragraphs. Pretty good. Pretty darn good. :P His amber eyes glowed with a savage inner fire as his gaze remained still. She could feel ...

Wow. I was going to review this post, but really RachaelElg! Wow! Everything I was going to tell her, you said it perfectly! But just to make it seem like ...

Hey there Bladesmith! I see you've just recently joined YWS. So welcome :) I shall begin by reading your story and then nit-picking. (Yes, not always fun to hear those, ...

First thing's first: I love your avvie. 8) Second thing, I like the names. If it's truly a story about other worlds, you need unique names. And these ones are ...

Thanks everyone for the great reviews, it's really helping me out :D YUP?! You just made out with him and all you can say is yup?! Italics for thoughts? This ...

Booyah! Hey Dianne! Spitfire's here to review :) Three turns of dainty handle I don't understand what you were trying to say here.. People here are so happy, their smiles ...

Hiya Mazey! It's Spitfire's time to shine 8) "Why do you steal?" her father had once asked her. She was but a child; ignorant and foolish, and was easily caught ...

Allrighty, Spitfire here to review! “Sara! Go back to bed!” a man with a knife said. I think he was my dad. He looked around. How had the man gotten ...

Hey there Baboon! Thought I'd drop in for a review 8) ... The main thing I noticed was this sentence: As the lightening flashed and the rains sliced down, as ...