Spitfire

I like this chapter a lot. Love the way Lindsey gets pissed and all because she says Jake thinks she weird, it's so...normal, natural, something a lot of people have ...

As usual, I thought it was good. I honestly have nothing else to say :lol: So keep it coming!

Okay! So here we are, with the chapter that'll finally answer questions you've probably wanted to know. Enjoy :D Chapter 4 “I can’t believe you bought my grandmother’s house.” I ...

I really like your story, it's really interesting. The only thing is that you have so many mistakes everywhere, that it's distracting and rather bothersome to read. You'll have to ...

Well since I had read it already, I will only recommend :lol: I like the prologue very much, and think it's really good for people that didn't quite get everything ...

Here we go, posting chapter 3, almost finished chapter 4. Hope you enjoy! :D Chapter 3 I gawked at Anthony, then his angelic wings. How does he hide those? “Stay ...

This chapter was entertaining, but I found some things seemed...off. When you talk about Maria in this chapter, you only refer to her as "Maria", you rarely - if ever ...

Okay, well I'm really enjoying this story so far. Like fairygirl said though, I'd add more detail to her training and all... Also, I'd be careful of the too-easy-going story. ...

Here we go, Chapter 2 of Shifters... Enjoy :D Chapter 2 I blinked a couple of times. “That is the lamest pick-up line ever.” He racked a hand through his ...

Ok, well we know a little bit more now. Guess the kid unwillingly went on a journey, adventure, whatever you wanna call it! There's not really anything else to say, ...

Huh. Really good. I like the story and I'm wondering why the can man would want to hurt her. My only thing is that your MC seems to talk to ...

Okay well here I go! The story was good and I really liked the characters. They seem very realistic, like any disfunctionnal family. :wink: There were some grammar errors a ...

Whoa :shock: ...wasn't expecting that one! Really good, definitely surprised me! So keep it coming!

All righty then. First post, yay! The story is good and I'd definitely like to read more. My only worry is that the MC seems too wise for a kid ...

Really good! Although it's too bad what happens to Miranda and the rest of them. This kid seriously has bad luck! “What happened, Noah?” Cole whispered anxiously. He had never ...