Spitfire

Well hey there! I'm Spitfire, here to review! It was hard to explain; it just smelt weird… Shouldn't it be smelled? I peered round the corner and saw a man ...

Oooh, I like this one :D Definitely the best chapter! There aren't really any mistakes, so I'm not going to go through the chapter... Just one thing I thought was ...

Okay, I've read most of the story, and it was good, excluding all the errors. However, one thing is really bugging me, your story is too "happily ever after". There's ...

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the reviews :D

First reply! Mouhahaha! Honestly dude, I'm debating... Do I really love it or really really love it...um... I'll go for the latter. :D Lol, really enjoyed it, thought the writing ...

Hey there RH! Here to review your story! I'm not going to go into the grammar department, I think pretty much everything was said on that... I thought the story ...

Here it is! Chapter 6 has been unleashed! :lol: Enjoy :D Chapter 6 Leaning against the refrigerator, I let myself slide to the floor. Once I sat, Abby came over ...

Again, I like it. It seems better, although I can't specifically remember much of what was changed, except for the names and the cops, really. For information, the story is ...

Okay, so people had told me that my prologue was too short and was missing a bit of information, so I changed it a little and added some stuff to ...

Okay, come one, come all! Lol :D Here's chapter 5 of Shifters... Enjoy :D Chapter 5 I burst out laughing. “You can’t seriously be insinuating that I’m a guy” Now ...

Okay, well I read chapters nine and ten, but I'm just going to comment on this one since I thought it would take a while to correct the mistakes... He ...

Love it! Since I'm the only person to have read the original - I think - I must say it's a lot better! I didn't notice any big grammar mistakes, ...

Well hey there! Review time! I thought the chapter was really good. I haven't read the original, so I definitely can't compare this one to the other one, but it ...

First review, yay! Okay first things first, really liked the chapter! Happy for Noah that he finally got something good out of his life! There were maybe about two grammar ...

This was really good, although kind of bad for the horse :lol: I really enjoyed your writing, details but not too many. Plus, the prologue got my curiousity, which is ...