Spitfire

Totally agree with all of you! I used to make lots of mistakes when using quotation marks, but when a couple of people mentioned it to me, I started focusing ...

So here is Chapter 9! I think it was my favourite chapter to write because of the action part, but I can say that from now on there's going to ...

Well hey there! Here to review! Katric appeared out of the crowd, arms wrapped around a powdered face young woman. His hands hung a little too low to be considered ...

This was really good! I enjoyed the battle scene, I just love those kinds of stories! Overall anything else I might've wanted to say has already been said, so I'll ...

I know it's been a while, I try to publish every week, but I've been busy. I'm posting this chapter and will post the next one on the week-end... Enjoy ...

Hey there! Finally getting to read chapter 1, so here I go... He knew his mother was He woke to a blazing inferno only to see a creature making the ...

Well hey there! I was surprised to get your PM, but since you wanted a review, here I am. The basic errors Lydia already went over, so I'm not gonna. ...

Okay, well here I am to review the edited version... As far as he can remember, his father had been same to him ever since —cold, distant, unapproachable. I would ...

Hey dude! Here I am to review! I saw this, just a little something: What had just happened? What had everything in the room suddenly floated up to Noah’s height? ...

Thanks for the reviews! There will be more action from now on, so I hope you'll like it! PS: There's a reason for her parents, it'll come later...

Well hey there GQ! I thought others would have reviewed by now, but apparently I'm the first, yay! :smt003 I thought the chapter was good, everything seemed to flow well, ...

Actually they are doctors, I mentionned it in another chapter, I just forgot to say that they were the head doctors also, instead of just managers :lol: Oops But thanks ...

Okay, well since your prologue and first chapter start with two different characters, you don't have to worry about the two not fitting together. The chapter was really good, I ...

Wow, this is really good! I loved the flow of your writing, and everything seemed to really chain-in together perfectly. I also liked the story base, how ever short it ...

Number 7 is up and running! Hope you guys like it, Enjoy :D Chapter 7 I signed the contract that was set in front of me. But as I came ...