Spitfire

Hey there Apple! I really liked the story, like the others said, you can easily fit yourself into the MC's situation, no matter who you are. But now, for the ...

I realized something the other day when I was writing this chapter; I'd never actually described CJ in the first chapter like I'd wanted to. So later on, I'll add ...

Yeah you can delete them when you go on your user portfolio, look at the file names and there should be a delete button. But if you don't want to ...

Hey there RH! So I've just finished reading chapter 2 and went straight for the third. Good idea that was! Like Classy, I already like the girl, although we really ...

Yeah, I know it's been a while since I read the first chapter, but I finally got back into the story! I definitely liked this chapter more than the first. ...

Yeah I did, I started reading the first chapter with Joshua and then the second. But then I saw there was a different chapter 1 and 2 with a different ...

The one called Kala had an eyebrow raised and an irritated look on her face was trying to snob Joshua all throughout his tour of Olympus. There's something missing here, ...

Okay, so I quickly read your two other chapter 1 and 2, but the third chapter is with Joshua and not Alice, so I'm guessing you're sticking with him(??) I ...

Okay, um yeah... This was really good and all, but I'm kind of confused about which beginning I was supposed to read. Is the original the good version or is ...

OK, this was good, but my only thing was the time difference you mentioned. I don't remember you saying anything about it being months since he left his village. I ...

Oooh, I really liked this one. It definitely isn't the same as the original idea I had about it...it's much better. I'm curious since I don't know where this is ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone, really appreciate it! As for Lauren, it's not harsh what you said, you spoke your mind, that's all. As per Crys' abilities, I don't want ...

It was good, but way too short! I barely had time to get into it and it was finished! As per a writer's opinion, the end was a good cliffhanger, ...

Hello again, doing chapter 3 now... Compared to the Tower, where everything was made of a rough stone, uneven and dangerous if you did not watch where you were going, ...

So I'm up to chapter 2, will read chapter 3 later on... A bolt of lightning shot out from Kanen’s hands shot out and struck him in the chest on ...