Spitfire

Hey there! Well I just stumbled across your first chapter, so here I go to review! And she didn’t. Calimyr rode hard until she could hear the bustle of the ...

Enjoy :D Chapter 14 I landed abruptly on my knees, after being flung a couple of feet away. I let out a rush of breath. So far I'd been able ...

Finally! :wink: Here I go.... The voice belonged to a short, plump woman who detached herself from her the crowd. We walked up the stone stairs leading to the open ...

Love it!!! That's all I have to say since I've read it before :lol: xxxxxxxxxxx

I've got to add something before anybody reads this. There's a part with a man speaking where there's going to be mistakes. That's deliberate! It's not a mistake! And that's ...

Hey there RH! I thought I had read this one since you hadn't posted in a while, but decided to check and saw this was a new one :lol: So ...

Actually that does help some, because, by reading along I got all that, but if you know right from the start, then you don't have to guess it or rack ...

Not much else to say except that it's a really good story!

Hey there, I know it took me awhile, but I'm here to review! I just got a few nitpicks... Melissa took a look around. It has been so long since ...

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for all the comments! I know it doesn't make sense now, but if you read the next chapter, it explains that he's not Japanese, he's ...

Tanya: Oye. Forgot to mention it. And I hadn't not noticed they had that in common, I just hadn't planned it originally. Treehugger: I'll try adding a bit more desciption ...

Just finished part 1, so here I go for part 2! The water renewed both Anna and Celine, and they were in a rather good mood s , so Anna ...

Hey there! Sorry it took me so long to comment, but I'm here to do it now... “And will you please make him stop crying so loud? He acts such ...

Hey there TH! Sorry it took so long to comment, I've been really busy lately. So here I go... Then, they turned backs carefully, they saw a soldier holding Milhad ...