Spitfire

Hey there! Well thanks for the PM, I shall review! All right, well I just read through it, and thankfully, there weren't any errors. (or none that I could see ...

Okay well I just noticed this, so I'm going to review!... The Dominion Code, a book that holds crucial knowledge about the world and how to obtain unlimited power. I ...

All right. I see you kept your story's prologue the same but changed your first chapter. I had read the original first chapter you had did, where it was something ...

Hello there! Sorry it took me so long to reply, I haven't been coming on lately, too busy. On to reviewing... Well since I'd read it already, there isn't much ...

Well I'd normally have something to mention here, but really, I don't. I think everyone else basically said anything I might have wanted to, especially Rascalover. Over all, good chapter. ...

Lol, well I honestly don't have anything to say since I'd read it before you'd even posted it. I don't remember exactly everything I had pointed out last time, but ...

Hey RH! Sorry it took me so long to review, I just hadn't gotten to your chapter yet! I honestly don't have much to say after Esme's review. She really ...

Hey there RS! Well since I already read the chapter, there's no need for me to comment on it again... As for errors, I think the other two basically mentioned ...

You know, when people say "comments are appreciated", they MEAN IT! So please, for the 15 something views that read and that don't comment, feel free to do so :lol: ...

Ha ha, so far the first one to reply :wink: When the crystals came to the villages, the villagers were able to call upon the magic to have their washing ...

I haven't read the first chapter you'd written, so I'm basing myself on this one only... Instead, she continued to hum that Beatles song, and I stared at her at ...

Also for me, I don't mind when people PM me. Especially when it's a story I've commented on a couple times, I like to be kept posted. So count me ...

Hey there! I was just browsing like that and saw this was a first chapter, so I've decided to review :lol: Here I go... He slowly stood up , barely ...

Aw crap! RH got here before me! Lol! Here I go... Some clothes was delivered for you, take a shower Were? It was an average d sized room with a ...

Okay, here I am for a little review time! I honestly don't have any nitpicks, I didn't see anything wrong. Yay! Other than that, I liked the chapter. There wasn't ...