Spitfire

Ha ha. I knew you would say something about the pink bubble. As for Tony & Crys, and Crys not being in school, that's in upcoming chapters. Oh, and I'll ...

Hey everyone! Alright, I had a little issue with this chapter, but I'm hoping you guys'll like it anyway! Enjoy :D Chapter 17 “Come on ! I’m sick of this! ...

Nah, I think I preferred the last one, just the fact that the whole parent's part was intriguing and all. This one wasn't bad, but I was expecting the guys ...

Hey there EMJ! I shall use my magnifying class talents (as you called them :wink: ) to review the long awaited chapter 4. Time to carry-on! That was what he ...

First one again, lucky me :D I picture d myself knocking on the door and telling the guard I’d changed my mind; I was coming back in. I was starting ...

AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! You can't end it like that!!! I want to know what happens afterwards! :? On to reviewing. I didn't notice any (or barely) grammar mistakes, so I won't even ...

Okay, well, since you've had two very long and nicely detailed reviews, I'm going to go for something a little shorter and less...descriptive :lol: I thought the story itself was ...

Ha ha, first one here. Mouhahahaha! Besides, the lighting was better near the windows. Just before you wrote it was dark because of the storm, so the lighting can't really ...

Hey there Skins! All right well I've just went through all of your chapters (I'd already read the first two) and I must say, I really like them! You've got ...

Hey EmmaJane, sorry it took me so long to reply, I've been like overboard busy :lol: On to the review... “Before I continue, may I say that I am most ...

Ooh, good chappy! The only mistakes I noticed are the ones Lauren mentioned, so lets not get into that. I'm also getting bad vibes from Scott now. Something tells me ...

All right. Normally I'd go over your mistakes and what nots, but everybody else seems to have been over them. So honestly, what's the point? I thought the story was ...

Thanks for the comments guys.....well girls :lol:

HEY! Part of the story , not me! And I'll have you know I learned how to walk in heels for my prom! -_- And yeah, like Tanya said, that ...

Hey everyone! I know I haven't posted in a really long time, so I'll do a small recap of the last chapter. Crystal had woken up after passing out when ...