Spitfire

Now why would I go and do something silly like tell you what's going to happen?? hihihihi :P Thanks for the nit-picking. I was in such a hurry to finish ...

Chapter 16 A soft knock reverberated from the door. My body instantly went into defensive mode, ready for any potential plans of Ben’s. It’s only when I heard a distinctive ...

Hey Lauren! Glad to see you posted #2 :D So on to reviewing... Natura took her chance when Nolen stormed out of the barn after one particularly difficult try at ...

I'm back !! And so I shall continue my review! Kieran looked down at his hands. His memories were so vivid, he expecting to see himself holding the stone again, ...

I'M HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERE!!!! But I don't have much time, so on I go! his soot-stained cheeks. Okay, there's nothing wrong with this, but I honestly have no idea what you mean ...

Turns out I had time during my lunch break, so here I go again! Allrighty then.... Nit-picking: None. Comments: I really liked this chappy. I'm happy that we finally get ...

EMMMMMMMMMAA! Sorry it took so long to reply, but it's mid-session for me at school now, so work work work! Plus I've been sick :( ...and Tanya took care of ...

BEAUTY?? I was bawling my eyes out, my face was all red and my lips were quivering. How was the beautiful???? And btw, you were always the one with the ...

Lol. I think so too. Unfortunately, I won't be writting anything this week because I've got sooooooo many projects to give in that I'll only be doing school were all ...

Okay. I'm finally about to review. I'd started saturday morning, but then the people we had coming over arrived, and so I had to stop my read. But now I ...

Allriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight! I just saw your message this morning and now I'm finally getting around to reviewing it. (Btw, I thought your message was funny ;) ) When her hands sunk ...

*shivers* Sorry dude, but I don't want to turn into you. Could you really imagine there being 2 yous? *shivers again* That's just too much crazy for me; double all ...

Alriiiiiight. Another one so likey :D On to nit-picking The last thing he remembered he was in the middle of a battle, with harpies swooping everywhere, and swords, and a ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone! :D For Tanya and Emma, yeah I meant allergic; for some reason I wrote asthmatic, or maybe it's my keyboard being evil..who knows? To Emma, ...

Chapter 15 Turns out Ben was really, really angry at me for getting him wet. I thought a nice hot shower, a couple minutes and loads of sucking up would ...